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[lovesickkiller]

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[(Anonymous)]

I think your Misa's hilarious but she's smart enough not to get caught by local police so I'm confused about why she's making mistakes with her anon post at Exit Void. Feel free not to respond, but otherwise you're doing great!

[lovesickkiller]

Thanks! You're right that she was smart enough to avoid the police for a time, and is decent enough with technology. This is quite a bit less high stakes than that though, so she isn't putting as much effort into making certain she isn't caught. While being found out does embarrass her, she is still of the mindset that things in EV don't really matter all that much. It's not her world, what happens here won't make a difference as soon as she's home.

I didn't mean to imply that she's being stupid. I had her mess up once when she was having a fairly innocuous conversation and simply forgot to make one of her posts anon because she wasn't paying attention, and once when she was shocked into reacting without thinking before that. Now that she's paying attention to it, it isn't going to happen again. I think that Misa is perfectly capable of not messing something like this up if it has her complete attention and she makes herself stop and think about things before responding, but I was playing it with less care on her part than that.

Thank you for the crit, you certainly bring up a valid point :)